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Friday, December 11, 2009

straight jacket love

...and the rocking begins
back and forth i fill my head with unnecessary dreams
over-the-top little inquisitions
thinking...wondering...pondering
brain swimming in the pond of the impractical
i struggle through it
giving sugarless smiles
and half-hearted answers and nods
as heartache simmers in the pot of burning insanity
crazy in love
psychotic in lust
disturbed in the withdrawal of everything...
and I discover my own simple diagnosis
not all there...
because you are not here...

(c)Pryncess Poetiq, 2009.

7 comments:

Eqlektik said...

The pangs of longing.....You captured the true essence of what its like.

Steph Jordan said...

As usual strong, intense and heart felt!

Anonymous said...

that was great! once again you never cease to put into words what i could not....great read!

mike/thepoetrician/twitter

S. Freeland said...

A great ending, and I can only echo what Eqlektik said. Great to be reading you again.

S. Freeland said...

A great ending, and I can only echo what Eqlektik said. Great to be reading you again.

Amanda Stephanie Ann said...

Wow,love that poem!! So articulate and the imagery!! Love your writing!!

Anonymous said...

NOT BAD! NOT BAD AT ALL...YOU JUST KNOW HOW TO SEASON YOUR THOUGHTS WITH A PINCH OF EXCITMENT ENOUGH TO REALLY GET THE MIND GOING! I LOVED IT!!

MIKE/@THEPOETRICIAN/TWITTER